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Can't Like You by ~katinkatinka77:iconkatinkatinka77:

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Your love is unpure
Your love is untrue
you like me
But I can't like you

What happened to loyalty
And trustworthyness to her
Why can't it go back
To the way things were

What is your goal
To ruin her life
Why do you keep trying
To cause her strife

Don't look at me like that
And please don't think those thoughts
And trust me when I say
I'm not the girl you sought

So back off of me
Cuz you already got a chick
She's an awesome person
And you're just a bitch

I can't and won't like you
Cuz you're like my brother
So please leave me alone
And stop playing undercover

Please don't make me hide
Or avoid you as much as I can
I just want to be your friend
So grow up and act like a fucking man

So get this straight
And in your mind get it through
You like me
But I can't like you
©2009 ~katinkatinka77
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Author's Comments

Derrick...enough said.

BTW, is trustworthyness a real word?

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~shirosutta Jun 5, 2009, 3:29:07 PM
Wait...Derrick!?!? WTF!?!?
And, umm, "trustworthiness" is a word, but "trustworthyness" is not...=P

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Marionettes.
Lifeless dolls attached to strings.
Humans are similar in these things.
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~soundoreo Jun 5, 2009, 4:51:40 PM
Good job, Nyia. I gotta say, this is a really good poem.

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I can proudly say... I disdain "Twilight".
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~arkangelzero Jun 5, 2009, 6:06:02 PM
Great job! Your poetry is progressing a lot Tinka!

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i once asked myself, "Why do we feel so much pain?"
Upon thinking deeply about the question, i realized it was only to see beauty.
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~katinkatinka77 Jun 6, 2009, 10:02:41 AM
Thank you so much. Glad you think my poetry is progressing.

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Happiness is like love, and love is like a ghost. It appears only to those who it wants to. But, others have to look for it. But, if you're really deserving, over time...it will appear.
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~katinkatinka77 Jun 6, 2009, 10:03:50 AM
Thanks so much...wow,Andy's actually on Deviantart??!!??The sky is falling!! lol jk. :D

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Happiness is like love, and love is like a ghost. It appears only to those who it wants to. But, others have to look for it. But, if you're really deserving, over time...it will appear.
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~katinkatinka77 Jun 6, 2009, 10:05:03 AM
Thanks so much...I didn't know that I'll change it...and yeah...I wrote this poem a while ago,around the time Derrick told me he was in love with me...

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Happiness is like love, and love is like a ghost. It appears only to those who it wants to. But, others have to look for it. But, if you're really deserving, over time...it will appear.
:iconshirosutta:
~shirosutta Jun 6, 2009, 3:24:14 PM
He told you that?? I thought he was dating your sister?!?!

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Marionettes.
Lifeless dolls attached to strings.
Humans are similar in these things.
:iconarkangelzero:
~arkangelzero Jun 6, 2009, 11:19:13 PM
Well it truly is. Keep it up, you can certainly do it!

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i once asked myself, "Why do we feel so much pain?"
Upon thinking deeply about the question, i realized it was only to see beauty.
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~katinkatinka77 Jun 11, 2009, 2:15:50 PM
Thank you very much

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Happiness is like love, and love is like a ghost. It appears only to those who it wants to. But, others have to look for it. But, if you're really deserving, over time...it will appear.
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